Monday, March 21, 2011

Unleash the Storm

Just another little sh*tty second draft poem for you, somewhat in the same vein as yesterday's but a little more manic.  For good reason, I think. 



This poem woke me up


at 4:30 in early morning dark,
early morning befuddlement manifesting in mixed metaphors,
the lightstreaks of dreams and blood pressure
on my eyelids’ insides
and the rumble of Monday morning trashcan wheels
to the curb
transforming into a lightningthunder talking picture show.

Flatter, fainter sounds and light
grow sharper louder quicker,
shorter intervals between
till light and sound are barely a boombeat apart,
briefly heartstopping
despite my fascination and attention.

The cat, wide-eyed, leaps off the warm bed
for sanctuary in a darker windowless place.

Drumbeats on the skin-thin tabletop of the sky,
like bad manners at dinner.
Bottle lid removed, opened skies are tipped,
poured on our roof,
spiced with ice
that smatters on window panes,
like salt skittering off the plate and onto the table.

After the drenching, a sudden stop,
water and steam sheeting, dripping,
like opening the dishwasher mid-cycle
to add an errant spoon.

The storm takes its clouds
and goes home,
leaving a bright supermoonglowball behind
for us to play with like gleeful accidental thieves.

Welcome, spring.
Welcome, lord of spring.
You have my full attention.

6 comments:

Unknown said...

I especially love the stanza that starts with "Drumbeats."

Audrey Mango said...

Awesome!

I love the way you describe the noise and activity and then end with attention. The poem is a prologue for what spring and the lord of spring have to say.

Anonymous said...

I love the drumbeats stanza, too. Wow. You're a talented poet and I can't wait to read more! Welcome to the High Calling network...we're so glad to have you!

Phecba said...

Hi!
Your poems are great.

I'm new with a new blog and I'm trying to get people to come check it out. Since its for my book,I thought it be a good idea to have other writers come and take a look.

Thanks for reading!

My Corner said...

Blogging must be working because that is a very good poem. Keep writing!

Kate Cartwright said...

WOW! I like your rhythmn and how you capture the sounds of the hazy morning. :-)